http://zachandrews.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Mon, 19 Jan 2009 03:48:52 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 http://zachandrews.edublogs.org/2008/12/08/the-wheel/comment-page-1/#comment-3 ritajeanstangherlin Mon, 19 Jan 2009 03:48:52 +0000 http://zachandrews.edublogs.org/?p=6#comment-3 Zach, Got your name right this time. You did a great job on this essay. Your transitioning was done at the beginning of each paragraph, rather than the end, but it worked so we'll just let it go that way. No EC. None needed. Zach,
Got your name right this time. You did a great job on this essay. Your transitioning was done at the beginning of each paragraph, rather than the end, but it worked so we’ll just let it go that way.
No EC. None needed.

]]> http://zachandrews.edublogs.org/2008/10/27/cats-cradle-by-kurt-vonnegut-2/comment-page-1/#comment-2 ritajeanstangherlin Sun, 09 Nov 2008 23:25:24 +0000 http://zachandrews.edublogs.org/?p=4#comment-2 You've done a really fine job of this book converted to a movie trailer. Only problems I see are that you did not identify all your actors as characters from the book, and I did not see text slide evidence of theme(s). You did get a really good mix when you rendered your video; although the text slides in the beginning were small and hard to see, the Ken Burns effect brought them into view much better. Overall, a fine job. You’ve done a really fine job of this book converted to a movie trailer. Only problems I see are that you did not identify all your actors as characters from the book, and I did not see text slide evidence of theme(s). You did get a really good mix when you rendered your video; although the text slides in the beginning were small and hard to see, the Ken Burns effect brought them into view much better. Overall, a fine job.

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